http://www.nytimes.com/2010/05/05/us/05flood.html?ref=us
The Cumberland River’s water level has receded a foot by Tuesday morning, expected to lower by an additional 11 feet by Wednesday. Nashville it’ four surrounding counties faced a flash flood over the weekend that killed 24 people, and left many houses and business damaged by the storm.
Grade: 8.5/10
ReplyDelete• You don't need the word "has" before receded. You could go without or use "had" depending on your meaning.
• Missing the word "and" before "expected to lower."
• "Nashville it’ four" - Huh?