Lexus announced today that they would halt sales of their 2010 Lexus GX 460, The announcement was made shortly after consumer reports magazine reported that there was a life threatening handling issue. Consumer report’s tests showed that this car was likely to rollover when slowing down during a sharp turn.
http://www.nytimes.com/2010/04/14/business/14auto.html?hp
Grade: 8/10
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• Missing a period after GX 460.
• Consumer Reports is a proper name and should be capitalized x2
• In this instance roll over should be two words.