Tuesday, February 9, 2010

News Summary #4

Home Aide Steals from Elderly
www.startribune.com/local83916677.html?elr=KArks:DCiUHc3E7_V_nDayscUiacyKUniciaec807EyUr

An elderly Hopkins Women living in the Augasta Chapel Veiw apartments was robbed by her own home aide. The aide stole around $2500 dollars, using checks from the women's apartment as well as charging the woman's credit card. The aide was fired a short time later due to similar accusations against her from a different client.

1 comment:

  1. Grade: 8/10
    Mistakes
    • Women doesn't need to be capitalized
    • It should be woman to match "an" not the plural "women"
    • Should be $2,500 (don't need "dollars" because you use the $ sign
    • Missing words: should be charging items to the woman's credit card

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